Hinge
Notes

A small private editing table for the moment before rewriting: decide which lines carry, turn, ask, or can go. It makes a card you can take back to your own draft.

Put a rough paragraph here

The table

Lay out a paragraph to begin.

Your revision card

Choose a role for at least one line.

How to use the table

Lay out your own text. Give each sentence a job: an anchor is the promise you will protect; a turn changes direction; a question creates a useful pressure; a release is permitted to leave. Move lines only after naming their job. The card records your choices and exact repeated words across active lines; it is a revision plan, not a verdict.